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    • CommentAuthorjillydong
    • CommentTimeMay 19th 2008
     
    Hi all.
    I just registered here so I'm new to this.
    My mum has battled BC for the past three years and never gave up hope. After so many set backs we were finally told at the beginning of this year that she was terminally ill and she passed away on 17th April 2008.
    She was in so much pain she was admitted to our local hospice and I wrote a poem for her, she died five days later. She never got to hear it but a friend of mine read it out at her funeral and I'd like to share it with you all. Please be kind though as I'm not very good at grammar so it's not a very good attempt.

    Sanctuary as you sleep
    Peace becomes your dream
    Quiet is the anguish
    Silenced it may seem

    Waking brings another day
    Of conflict, sometimes fear
    You’re fighting the invisible
    Yet you know it’s here

    Questioning the reasons
    Of how this came to be
    Astounding is your courage
    As is your dignity

    Strength becomes your hero
    Faith becomes your friend
    But love is all around you
    The kind that knows no end

    Comfort from your family
    Memories take you home
    And suddenly you realise
    That you are not alone

    Words can be uneasy
    Love difficult to express
    But you are my own hero
    My life, my happiness

    Thanks for reading it and God bless you all.
    Take care of yourself and each other.
    Jill
    x x x x x x x x x
    • CommentAuthorcaroleann
    • CommentTimeMay 19th 2008
     
    hi jill, first my condolences on you losing your brave mum ,i read your poem it made me cry .........it was so full of lovei`m sure if your mum got to read it she`d have been proud of you for writing it again my condolences caroleann
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    please accept my condolences on the loss of your mum ... you clearly loved her to bits and that is a beautiful poem. she would have been so proud.
    • CommentAuthorjules1964
    • CommentTimeMay 19th 2008
     
    my condolences too, what a lovely poem, and if I may say so, very cleverly written!
    • CommentAuthorJulsRis
    • CommentTimeMay 19th 2008
     
    Bless you Jill, take care of yourself, and give yourself some time. Beautifully written poem, Im sure your mum would have loved it.
    julie xxx
    • CommentAuthorAJXXX
    • CommentTimeMay 19th 2008
     
    A beautiful tribute to your special mum. She will always be alive in your heart

    Alisonxxxx
    • CommentAuthorjillydong
    • CommentTimeMay 19th 2008
     
    Thank you all for your lovely words. Mum definitely was a beautiful person and my best friend and I miss terribly.
    It made me feel better to share it with someone.
    Thank you
    lots of love
    Jill
    x x x x x

    ps caroleann, I'm sorry I made you cry x x x
    • CommentAuthorIreneM
    • CommentTimeMay 19th 2008
     
    BEAUTIFUL. well done jill.

    Irene
    • CommentAuthorginjill
    • CommentTimeMay 19th 2008
     
    Hi Jill,

    A beautiful, well writen, heart felt poem....I never cry, but have a tear in my eye, im so sorry to hear you lost your mum.

    Jill
    • CommentAuthorLiverbird
    • CommentTimeMay 19th 2008
     
    Oh Jill
    the tears are running down my face as i read that beautiful tribute to your dear mum.
    My mum fought with BC for 6 yrs but lost her battle 4 yrs ago. There is not a day goes by when i dont think of her and miss her.
    I wouldnt want her to be here though and see me having been Dx with this 'cruel' disease.She was such a caring loving person like i am sure your mum was.
    Treasure every memory and know she is watching all you do.
    I fight on knowing mum would be proud of me.

    Hug and Love Ruthxxx
    • CommentAuthorJennywren
    • CommentTimeMay 19th 2008
     
    Jill,

    You found some beautiful and heartfelt sentiments to express your love and pain at what your mother was going through, at what must have been such a difficult time for you and your family. Thank you for sharing with us. I hope you continue to find comfort and support in this group.

    Jennyx